Severed Connection
The hand lay on the ground,
rotting in its state. Maggots feasted on its flesh tearing in little by little.
There was nobody attached to it; it was just a hand. It rested under the bush
shielded from view but not from scent.
The hand gave off a stench worse than anything
anyone could possibly imagine. It was the complete and total stench of death; a
stench of damned odor, seemingly coming strait from hell itself.
A man
ambled passed the bush and stopped at the stench. He breathed in deeply, the
odor caressing his nostrils. He exhaled, smiled, and bent down to examine the
rotting specimen.
He reached
down with his red stained hands, and squatted over the hand. He pulled back the
bush wiping the red substance on the lower hanging vegetation. The substance was not his. He
smiled again and picked up the hand trying to shake off the maggots that
held on tightly.
“Ahh… I
knew I forgot something.”
8 comments:
I just giggled, thinking about your teacher's face.
Love the story, the sensory overload...
It made me think of Poppy Z. Brite's Exquisite Corpse ;-)
Teachers are sooo sensitive! ;) I know that smell very intimately, from living in the countryside with cats who kill all sorts of vermin. Sometimes they go back and nuzzle in the carcass before coming inside and jumping on the bed for a snuggle...
I should've mentioned that this was the last year that I was at my Christian school, lol.
Thanks! I was quite proud of this back in the day and still am proud.
Sam, what a lovely romp into a death pile of goo....I bet your teacher did have a time with the, as Magaly put it, sensory overload, especially if she/he was an instructor at a Christian school. Yikes. I too giggled at the effect of the discovery. Good stuff. Thanks, Oma Linda
"I knew.. I forgot something.." - what a delightful end of a story!
A mouse died in our huge office printer two days ago..so that smell description in your story was very "fresh" in my mind.
Thanks for a lovely piece (literally) to celebrate!
Anna
They really are, especially when you're at a religious school. The image and scents conjured up in my head from the story of you cat reminds me of the Stephen King book "Pet Semetary" if you have ever read it.
Thanks! Giggles are exactly what I wanted to get out of this story. I'm glad I can share my dark humor with people :)
Why thank you! And kudos on the play on words. If you read any of my other blog posts you can see I'm slightly obsessed with bad anthropology puns ;)
Also, ick for the mouse! We had that happen to my friend's car once.
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